The Nobody

The Nobody

281 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
Destiny By dezzibabe Updated Nov 14, 2010

Danisha ,also  known as Neesh, is in love with the boy on her street named Jordan. But she isn't the prettiest girl in the world. Unlike her beautiful friend Latoya. Danisha really likes him and wants him to notice her,then like her, then ask her out. Will he like her?  ( This is my first story!)

dezzibabe dezzibabe Nov 25, 2010
thanks guys! i fixed it up and added some more. greatly apreciated!!
MsNikki MsNikki Nov 17, 2010
I like this one a lot. Very into it!
                              Would you please check out mine too? comments would be helpful!!
                              Two Bodies One Soul
dezzibabe dezzibabe Nov 16, 2010
@chaterboxxx grammatical error? Where ? im not very good at proof reading : ( 
chaterboxxx chaterboxxx Nov 16, 2010
a bit of grammatical error but that can be easily fixed. I like it so far and it can go some where when you go back over it. Keep going im with you on this one!
                              -STARR