That Girl

That Girl

5.3K Reads 102 Votes 8 Part Story
MiMi By minibun Updated Aug 28, 2011

LiLy Johnson, a lonly girl in a small yet big town of Foxwood Virginia, is on a journey to find the reason behind the negative driscrimination against her. The secrets and lies behind these Foxians would be brought to light by her hands with the help of her enemy Nathan Greenwood and bestfriend Ben Hudgins.

Melsworld Melsworld Aug 19, 2011
Ben seems like a good kid and he's nice to Lily without caring how other people will treat him for being her friend he's fearless it seems
Melsworld Melsworld Aug 19, 2011
Wondering what happened that could make a whole town hate one girl
xxXWicked_LovelyXxx xxXWicked_LovelyXxx Jan 14, 2011
I love it! Like you said there are quite a few grammar mistakes but all are easily fixable. It's great so far though! Pretty original too :)
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Jan 13, 2011
The girl in the pic is pretty! :D I'm Asian too but I never experienced that...This story is so nice! :D Just a few spelling errors here and there but otherwise, really good!
SoCcErChIcK33 SoCcErChIcK33 Dec 05, 2010
Wow very interesting, this isn't the genre that I usually read, but I actually like it :) Keep writing :)
                              
DrawLoveOnMyArms DrawLoveOnMyArms Dec 03, 2010
I actually think this is rlly good :) 
                              I think asians are really cool. Anyway you should better start uploading because i need to read :))