submissive  to my dominate (boyxboy)

submissive to my dominate (boyxboy)

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Mitchell By mj5000 Updated Jan 28, 2014

Everyone knew me as one of  the jock of the school Jake Taylor. But what they didn't know was i was truly... I was a closet gay. That all changed when when the captain of the football team john Whaley took a interest in me. His parents are major rich, he took me in when my parents kicked me out for being gay. I thought they would understand, but they pushed me away out the door. But his help came at a price. for my freedom. Something I never thought i would be a submissive, a week excuse for how fare i sunken.  Now i'm his submissive and he's my dominate.

SilverUta SilverUta Dec 23, 2015
Is it sometimes hard to type with your 't' key mostly the letter t is missing
blue_Unidentified blue_Unidentified Jul 18, 2015
It's great! It's just the spelling and some missing words between phrases.
blue_Unidentified blue_Unidentified Jul 18, 2015
Wait is tgis like a mash up of (Jake)Jacob Black and Taylor Lautner? lol Jake Taylor
SoulOutBreak SoulOutBreak May 01, 2015
sorry I dont mean to be rude but u keep writing "old" instead of "told" just thought I would tell you
Wolf_Fire_Ice Wolf_Fire_Ice Oct 28, 2014
Really do check your spelling, but it's a little quick for my taste to have him thrust into something like bdsm after coming out gay. Other than that it's quite good
BryannaMclean BryannaMclean Aug 19, 2014
This really needs a lot of editing!!!!!!! But it's alright so far