Beneath 5th City

Beneath 5th City

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Jesse Sprague By JesseSprague Updated 2 days ago

Jaisa wasn't the name she was born with. Earth's invaders gave her the name. 
  
  She used to have a normal life, complete with a house and a husband. The day the alien invaders descend, calling themselves gods, and slaughter most of humanity, all of that changes. In the society established by the gods, Jaisa's only value is her beauty and ability to please. 
  
  In this society of opulence and immorality, the price of disobedience is death. The new gods have enslaved humanity, and to reclaim humanity's future, Jaisa will be an avenging angel. But first, she must find a way to survive, no matter what she must sacrifice.

AaronRyuchi AaronRyuchi Jan 08
So wait, she waited until they walked back to the car to finish her sentence?
AaronRyuchi AaronRyuchi Jan 08
Your description feels a bit odd. Not sure how, but it doesn't flow...
RobertHelliger RobertHelliger Oct 30, 2016
Beneath 5th City is an excellent science fiction novel. I like the writing and characters.
JoeyRichardson JoeyRichardson Dec 13, 2016
Great introductory for a chapter.  From the start it was exciting and continued all the way through.  More spiders, when I thought I would get away from them.  The one minor thing I suggest is the pace.  It might have been a little fast but I still enjoyed it.
wordsinsilk wordsinsilk Sep 25, 2016
These actions feel like they're stalling the pacing. They probably don't need to be so articulate
AaronRyuchi AaronRyuchi Jan 08
No young kid I know would ever sleep this fast, this quietly.