My Hot Mythical Being

My Hot Mythical Being

16 Part Story 86.6K Reads 1.6K Votes
J. Foster By JynxBabe Updated Jan 20, 2012

Anahi, is a normal 20 year old college student that thinks that her life is boring. No family or friends except her foster sister Leslie she also finds herself wishing for more. Suddenly, Anahi finds her life is not what it seems and is thrown into the world of the Gaea. Not only does she find the family she never had but with each day brings new feelings and powers she never thought exsisted...add all that plus the extra bonus of a hot man as her mate makes Anahi's life suddenly much more interesting.

This is good but I'm pretty sure that most of us would have reacted the same way as the slut if we had walked in to a diner and our beau of 2 years was practically screwing some random chick. If this was from Molly's POV then we all would've been praising her for getting rid of him.
chellebelly94 chellebelly94 Dec 30, 2011 04:22AM
I love the cove!!! I just finished all i want for cristmas, of was so Good o wish of was longer!! Im starting this one now and just know it well bee great!!:);)
eww barbie girl, i bet her boobs are plastic XD any who! great start!
Amazerful Amazerful Dec 14, 2011 02:52AM
Wow this is great! I love the tension between Anahi, Adeke and Barbie:)
                                    This is so good, I don't know what to expect from these characters because I feel like they're so full of surprises and that's what I like about it. Overall, you have great descriptions and sentence structure. Great work!
CapriLore CapriLore Dec 14, 2011 02:18AM
Eh, I like the idea of theirs being 'love at first sight', but I can't help but feel bad for the annoying little Barbie girl. I mean, if I were her, I'd be devastated. Haha- that sucks. :p
Danilynn Danilynn Dec 14, 2011 12:42AM
Very well written... I have to agree with her not all tequila is created equally :)