Love Floats

Love Floats

2.8K Reads 20 Votes 3 Part Story
Amy Ball By AeMberlYn Updated Nov 22, 2010

Emily thought she needed to find love. She was waiting for the day when the right man would appear, and sweep her off her feet. She was waiting. In the mean time she was best friends with Ben. Perfect in every way, except, he didn't seem to be interested. That's when she met Mark. Maybe this love thing really can happen.

susierasmussen susierasmussen Nov 27, 2010
Hi Amy, I am enjoying reading your story.  You are an excellent writer.  I love you!
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 24, 2010
wow! I like that! sounds like my life so much its not funny lol
                              also if u have time could u check out my story too thnx
                              
AeMberlYn AeMberlYn Nov 23, 2010
@tigerLily_X Thank you! I will keep that in mind. I tend to get a little crazy about the details. Also, I wanted the prologue to sound like a conversation, or an entry in someone's diary. The rest should be more story form though. Thanks again! :)
tigerLily_x tigerLily_x Nov 23, 2010
nice start  - very story-of-my-life, but try not to make it sound too much like a diary. those tend to drag with too much information. 
AeMberlYn AeMberlYn Nov 19, 2010
You like it!? Awesome! I will definitely tell you when there is an actual "Benjamin". hahaha
                              I suppose I have been able to write like this for awhile. :)
                              I love you too!
MatthewBall MatthewBall Nov 19, 2010
Very cool. :)
                              Especially since I know now that there isn't really a "Benjamin" out there I haven't known about. haha
                              Have you always been able to write this well??
                              I love you!