Hold Me Down ↗ l.r.h

Hold Me Down ↗ l.r.h

87.7K Reads 1.6K Votes 22 Part Story
Lynn Silvermist By LynnSilvermist Completed

"When your ex became your brother"

What will you do?

Warning :mature, 18+ dettected

Deeeaannn Deeeaannn Mar 17, 2016
Luke," gitu harusnya. Pokoknya kalo setelah dialog ada narasi pakai koma
rmth01_ rmth01_ Mar 14, 2016
Yang benar: "Mom(,)" rengekku .....
                              Setelah dialog pakai koma jangan titik ya.