He is my dad but he is hot +18
Your English is bad but the story is good please do something about it
WTF....in Louis' dick.....the grammer is terrible...I can't even be mad at Harry tho bcuz I'm making a book kind of similar to this.....
2- on* bc that would make Louis bleed
3- THERE IS NO CONSENT HERE, YOU SHOULD PUT A WARNING FOR THAT
Maybe that's reason she left Harry and Louis wasn't aloud to see him, and she blamed Louis for it
I think that I didn't understand half of it and your grammar if damn TERRIBLE