He is my dad but he is hot +18
You guys are so harsh... I get that the Grammer isn't great and the plot doesn't make a bunch of sense, but this was most likely the first book that she created...
Your English is bad but the story is good please do something about it
WTF....in Louis' dick.....the grammer is terrible...I can't even be mad at Harry tho bcuz I'm making a book kind of similar to this.....
2- on* bc that would make Louis bleed
3- THERE IS NO CONSENT HERE, YOU SHOULD PUT A WARNING FOR THAT
I'm wondering if this person's autocorrect was taking a break at this point.
Bruh it's fu king weird asf and ur grammar sucks ass and I'm just really confused about this whole book