The things you'll never hear....

The things you'll never hear....

257 Reads 6 Votes 2 Part Story
Sarah By Sarahbear1012 Updated Dec 19, 2010

Kale Everst Is in love with Claire Foremint. He always has since 8th grade. They were best friends since kindergarten.No one knew. No one expected what she would do next. Kale blames himself. As he tries to make sense of this all. This is the story. Everyday he visits her and tells her the things she will never hear.

TheEscapist TheEscapist Nov 22, 2010
Aw poor guy :(
                              
                              Um well there's quite a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes  -betrayed, and others and also stuff like your - should be you're
                              
                              I dunno maybe do a spell check on it...
                              
                              But the writing's good and I actually enjoyed reading it :D