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Into the woods

Into the woods

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MaMa Bear By fourtris-babies Updated May 07

Ava Royals is an 18 year old photographer. When her and her dad move into a small town surrounded  by forest she finds it an amazing opportunity to get some amazing shots and further embrace her passions, but when strange things start to happen and she starts to see things in the forest she starts to investigate uncovering more and more about this little town she now calls home. As she decide to take her investigation further she and her new found friend lena decide to take a trek in the woods what they find takes them both by surprise and now they realize why people leave these woods alone. turns out the legends are true and more terrifying than anyone has imagined.

Cheveyo wild cat is 21 year old alpha of the dark shadows pack. When he feels a strange pull to the nearby small town he tries to ignore it because of the agreement between the were's and the humans, but as the pull gets stronger he goes sniffing around the outskirts of town just a bit. When he catches an amazing scent around one of the houses just around the outskirts of the town he HAS to go back but when he finds the source of the amazing smell in his forest with another girl during a hunt, things get a bit interesting.

KansasCole KansasCole Dec 24, 2016
Maybe, "I put my hand to my chest, feeling my heart beating rapidly through my sweat-soaked shirt, whispering to myself, 'it was just a nightmare.'" I don't know. I hope that was constructive 😊.
SkyWhitehorse SkyWhitehorse Jun 05, 2016
I think you are good at making writing, but it seems to be missing the "hook". When you write hopefully you have your plot in mind and something that leaves a question in the readers mind about where you might be going with this story. Hopefully this helps.