"A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep."---Salman Rushdie
[Cover made by @AN_almightydreamer ]
Well written.. It gives me the creeps! and the way you've written it adds to the eerie feeling..
you have a beautiful way of painting this particular situation. and i do think you have "named the unnameable".
great flow of the poem. the broken structure really compliments the concept. short and sweet!
Woooow that last line really made an impact and tied up the poem nicely!