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The Race

The Race

300K Reads 9.6K Votes 20 Part Story
Ansley By writeon27 Completed

Lennox Gordon had basically trained for the Race all her life.  She was always cool, calm, and collected when it came to the month and a half Race around the United States.  She never let anything get in her way or distract her.
But then Kier Portner came along and changed everything.  
Kier's the newbie in the Race and trained in secret with Lennox's father, who was the first ever winner of the Race.  Kier gets under Lennox's skin and makes her feel things that she'd never felt before with anyone.  
Are the feeling between the two of them real, or does Kier have an ulterior motive? 
Is this Race going to be just like another other Race, or is it going to be a 'Race of Love' as the entire country is assuming?

mandala2 mandala2 Jun 26, 2016
The winner gets five hundred MILLION? Oh please... lets make it a little more unrealistic while we're at it... sounds like it might be a mix of The Hunger Games and Death Race
mandala2 mandala2 Jun 26, 2016
I feel like I have to say... that this kind of event would never be accepted so freely.. they use WEAPONS, so what? The authorities just accept it because the event brings in money? You shouldve made it that it was an underground event.. would've been easier to accept this entire storyline
Saniya0122 Saniya0122 Nov 29, 2016
This race must be pretty serious if they really havn a SCHOOL assembly for it
corvums corvums Feb 26, 2016
How come I'm thinking Hunger Games? No offence; I really like it for now :)
TaylorJohnson16 TaylorJohnson16 Jul 23, 2015
It's not really a miracle if your parents died. This is just me but if I was in a car accident with my parents I would want to die with them instead of losing them.
AlexandriaCardun AlexandriaCardun Jul 09, 2015
and if he kills your daughter in the race, whose fault might that be?