Harry Potter Next Generation Time Turner

Harry Potter Next Generation Time Turner

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That Sparkling Jesus Freak Potterhead By JessieSpark Completed

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James Potter and Fred Weasley broke into Harry's office and stole a time-turner.
  What will happen to them and the rest of the Potter-Weasley clan, as well as Scorpius Malfoy and Teddy Lupin, when it breaks and they end up in 1995? Will they ever be able to get home?
  
  ...............
  I am terrible at descriptions.
  Well, don't expect to much from me, this is my first ever fanfiction so....... good luck to me? Arggh, I'm gonna fail, oh well. Enjoy the book.

  • harrypotter
  • nextgeneration
  • orderofthephoenix
  • potterkids
  • scorose
  • teddylupin
  • timeturner
  • weasley
I just started this and it already seems like a very well written fan fiction, I'm sure you're a fantastic writer.💕
Yes, Let's Believe Someone When They Tell You That They're From The Future
                               #Logic
Yay, my line! And the story's good
                              
                              
                              
                              ~ Jessie (Admin) & Victoire
Stop you are a terrible writer. This is pretty good, actually! :)
June_H June_H May 29, 2016
K, so you should really improve the story description. I know it's hard to make good descriptions, but you should at least make it less of a run on sentence. (I use commas a lot too)
ZFSweet ZFSweet Apr 26, 2016
Good, try not to do it in first person, try to do it on third person