Disguise Girl

Disguise Girl

74.3K Reads 4.1K Votes 37 Part Story
Dreamer By Loud_Soul Updated Jul 25

**UNEDITED** WILL EDIT EVERYTHING AFTER THE BOOK IS DONE.
When I woke up, it was very dark. I was surrounded by many tall trees. I saw my face on the reflection of the lake. I was wearing a white dress smeared of blood and the hem of the dress was ripped. My face paler then usual. I could hear a soft voice echo in the dark forest.

"My bride, I will find you. When I do,I will never let you slip from my hands. You will be mine for eternity."
I could feel fear grip my heart. I ran as far as my feet could take me.


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(Highest Rank #17) 30-07-2016

mikaylaf35 mikaylaf35 Mar 25
That king should get a stick n run it up his u knw where, n the ending wad funny I enjoyed it
zinaschultz zinaschultz Apr 19
Fresh. Different. Unique and just what I needed! I luv ur book!!!!!! Zina
I really like the first chapter I wished the sister would get out of dreamland though, rejecting every guy like on her 25th birthday a prince will sweep her of her feet
Ok so I'll just help you out an a few grammar mistakes you made hope you don't mind 😃
Thank you very much! :) ♡♥♡♥♡ I've been waiting for so long ... I really really love the story :) :)
I think ur doing great  lovin the story so far sweetie. Can't wait to see what happens next