On The Inside

On The Inside

1K Reads 24 Votes 1 Part Story
Brendan By Sup3rman Completed

Never judge a book by its cover.

hotstuff101 hotstuff101 Jun 18, 2011
Very deep and thought provoking.  I enjoyed this poem and it actually made me think...not an easy task. :)  You have talent.
Nikita02 Nikita02 Dec 22, 2010
wow.....you really know how to write a poem and keep us readers interested :)
                              lovely work and soo true to life...
gabbyalex gabbyalex Nov 29, 2010
really really nice. . . you never know wat ppl are going thru inside.
dandeliongirl01 dandeliongirl01 Nov 27, 2010
It's a beautiful poem and very true.  Someone who is all smiles may be hurting underneath. (Only thing is it should be their not there.).  Hat off to you, I suck at writing poems, but I love reading them!!!!! Voted!
woodkid woodkid Nov 24, 2010
True... Sometimes, we think that our problems are the most tragic of all, but we forget that there are other people down there who have problems even worse than the ones we face...
                              
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hobbity0923 hobbity0923 Nov 18, 2010
awesome, and i'm not much for poetry (other than epics and plays and stuff liek that), but this one's really deep