Hidden Angel

Hidden Angel

48.9K Reads 2.2K Votes 35 Part Story
MusicalNatalie By MusicalNatalie Updated Dec 14, 2016

I'm Adelaide Silvers and today is the day I've dreaded for years. Its my birthday. Long ago my mom told me that all twenty year old men and women go to a royal ball hosted every year in December.
    
    Why, you might ask? Because of the possibility of us being mated to Vampires, Werewolves, Fairies, or Angels. That's right. The possibility. Hopefully I'm not mated. I can't fathom the idea of somebody thinking they own me, or me owning them. Who cares about all this mated fate bullshit anyway? I'm just an ordinary girl. If I end up mated to someone, I would just be a disappointment to them.
     
    Adelaide is a girl intent on leading her own life and controlling her own destiny. Join her on this journey where she learns about her past and tries to conquer her fears of her future.
    
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    Hey! I hope you enjoy my story, I'm a bit newer at writing so go through this journey with me!

I_n_e_f_f_a_b_l_e I_n_e_f_f_a_b_l_e Dec 28, 2016
This is me but without Netflix and a best friend 😂 My parents also feel sorry for my future boyfriend/husband
starletXD starletXD Nov 08, 2016
Love it so far! Just thought to write a tip here. You make her seem really anxious for this party. You could milk it a. It more and make us really feel her dread 😉 the more we get to know the main character and feel with her the more readers you entice to continue and not put down your book!
CherryInc CherryInc Nov 23, 2016
Be careful about its and it's, they mean totally different things
Kinda_Crazy Kinda_Crazy Jul 15, 2016
OH GAWD 
                              I THINK IM GONNA HAVE NIGHTMARES
                              THAT NECK 😨😨😨
whatup117 whatup117 Aug 15, 2016
Im so happy that she isn't frozen while he insults her and she actually fights back.
Marphye Marphye Mar 21, 2016
I. bet that photo is photoshopped. How is that girl so skinny?