Hidden Angel

Hidden Angel

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MusicalNatalie By MusicalNatalie Updated a day ago

I'm Adelaide Silvers and today is the day I've dreaded for years. Its my birthday. Long ago my mom told me that all twenty year old men and women go to a royal ball hosted every year in December.
    
    Why, you might ask? Because of the possibility of us being mated to Vampires, Werewolves, Fairies, or Angels. That's right. The possibility. Hopefully I'm not mated. I can't fathom the idea of somebody thinking they own me, or me owning them. Who cares about all this mated fate bullshit anyway? I'm just an ordinary girl. If I end up mated to someone, I would just be a disappointment to them.
     
    Adelaide is a girl intent on leading her own life and controlling her own destiny. Join her on this journey where she learns about her past and tries to conquer her fears of her future.
    
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    Hey! I hope you enjoy my story, I'm a bit newer at writing so go through this journey with me!

starletXD starletXD Nov 08
Love it so far! Just thought to write a tip here. You make her seem really anxious for this party. You could milk it a. It more and make us really feel her dread 😉 the more we get to know the main character and feel with her the more readers you entice to continue and not put down your book!
CherryInc CherryInc Nov 23
Be careful about its and it's, they mean totally different things
Kinda_Crazy Kinda_Crazy Jul 15
OH GAWD 
                              I THINK IM GONNA HAVE NIGHTMARES
                              THAT NECK 😨😨😨
whatup117 whatup117 Aug 15
Im so happy that she isn't frozen while he insults her and she actually fights back.
Marphye Marphye Mar 21
I. bet that photo is photoshopped. How is that girl so skinny?
Haha that was quite sudden "then i saw him" but heyy romance/love has got to start somewhere right??