These aren't haikus.
These aren't poems
These aren't summaries.
So a little girl is talking to someone who died in a fire trying to get her doll. Or a little girl died in a fire but her doll didn't. The second one would be really weird..
i got it now...i think. they bought vans for 19 dollars and didnt use them...? i guess this one is okay; anywayz i like the way you crushed the main idea into 5 lines.