To Save My Daughter

To Save My Daughter

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Shattered_Violet By Shattered_Violet Completed

Book One: Ava, a single mother; works hard to support herself and her daughter Grace. Ava is no different for any other mother in the world; she'd do anything to protect her child. What she thought was just a typical night at home, changed her life forever. After pleading with Grace to take out the trash, nothing in her life would be the same. Who would have thought that vampires were real.

IceMaiden786 IceMaiden786 May 29, 2013
@Shattered_Violet okay I will spend my time focusing on that in my comments. Moving on...
Shattered_Violet Shattered_Violet May 28, 2013
@IceMaiden786 so really what I am looking for are plot wholes.. how people react to Ava and Xander. Which I've seen most have the same reaction.
Shattered_Violet Shattered_Violet May 28, 2013
@IceMaiden786 Well the grammar is bad throughout the whole thing.. Just a warning. I haven't looked at it in over a year.
Shattered_Violet Shattered_Violet May 28, 2013
@IceMaiden786 Yeah... Lets just say this is the roughest rough draft... lol
IceMaiden786 IceMaiden786 May 28, 2013
haha romance in my life is a carton of ice cream and a kindle. amen to that sister. I love your writing style already. You've added humour and maturity perfectly.
P_kedia P_kedia May 28, 2013
A great chapter overall . The change in tenses got me a bit confused and there were some typos. A mother's POV is new and interesting to read.