Kidnapped By the Alpha

Kidnapped By the Alpha

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ksca0414 By ksca0414 Updated Mar 04, 2015

So, Jane has all her summer planned out; she's going to hang with her friends and not give a damn about any consequences that come into the equation because that's what teenagers do. I mean she just graduated high school, give her some slack it's party time! That's all until plans change and her mom ships her off to her dad's house because Jane can't afford to stay by herself if she wants to go to college. But everything changes when she is kidnapped by the Alpha...Jane doesn't know the supernatural exist or that she happens to be the Alpha's mate. Jane is whipped up into an exciting adventure where she finds not only herself but her past, so join her on her new discovery because after all this isn't your normal kidnapping.

odalys23 odalys23 Nov 16, 2017
Peaches and Cream sweeter than sweet, Chocolate cheeks and chocolate wings 😊
Nathy_24_ Nathy_24_ Jan 04
She dresses like a slut.. nobody wants to see your legs, no one think showing your belly button is sexy or cute or pretty. Much less if it's pierced. If you graduated from high school then start dressing like it. Soon you're gonna need to get a job and I pray thats not how you plan to go dressed .
viktormyoppa viktormyoppa Mar 15, 2017
Good for you buddy. 😑😑
                              
                              Now would you stop bragging???
Nathy_24_ Nathy_24_ Jan 04
MAYBE HE'S MAGNUS CHASE AS A BABY AND HE HAS A LONG LOST SISTER HE CAN'T REMEMBER! oh wth am I saying he's a son of Frey and Freys a dude..
jhefli0353 jhefli0353 Aug 26, 2016
And there we go again. Another typical wattpad girl hating her body AFTER saying all this stuff that "girls would kill for".
awilliamson20 awilliamson20 Dec 28, 2015
Um, there are quite a few dialogue mistakes. Whenever you start someone new speaking, you need to start a new paragraph. Otherwise sometimes it can be confusing as to who is talking.