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The harpy with wings

The harpy with wings

432 Reads 24 Votes 8 Part Story
Kate-lyn Martens By Kate-lynMartens Updated Jul 16, 2013

Rebecca isn't the best fighter out of her sisters, but she is the only one with wings.  After four years of training and failed tests she finally gets  sent out on her first mission.  when things go wrong, she's forced to fight for her life in the decaying human world. She begins to find out the horrible truths about her past and the secret of what happened to her mother. she's forced into a decision that will change her life for forever. will she make the right choice?

kellywellyapparently kellywellyapparently Jul 20, 2013
Okay not bad of a start, I think this start was a very nice one. The description and dialogue was sufficient and if I were to be very picky, I'd say paragraphing can be improved. Well done! (:
Riksta10001 Riksta10001 Jul 12, 2013
@Sky_Is_The_Limit Stood at the ready is an old fashioned term, meaning ready for action :)
Kate-lynMartens Kate-lynMartens Jul 06, 2013
@CarsonFaircloth haha I know your mind is a wonderful thing sometimes :)
CarsonFaircloth CarsonFaircloth Jul 05, 2013
@Kate-lynMartens 
                              
                              No problem. And it's strange, how dreams can sometimes make the best ideas. But helpful. ^_^
Kate-lynMartens Kate-lynMartens Jul 01, 2013
@Orbiting_Jupiter  thanks so much for taking a look :)  and yes my sentence structure is always an issue lets just say gramma isn't my thing :P
Kate-lynMartens Kate-lynMartens Jul 01, 2013
@Basic_Space thanks :) its still a work in progress i'll be sure to cheque my descriptions  thanks so much :)