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Yes, I'm possessive but she's MINE!

Yes, I'm possessive but she's MINE!

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Jaz By Hellokitty123 Updated May 27, 2013

I can’t believe I see my mate! She’s the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen. I see her walking through town looking through store windows. I watch her long brown hair sway with the movement of her hips. I see those pouty red lips and the longing in her pretty green eyes. Once she’s my mate she'll have everything she could ever want. 
She walked around for about an hour. I followed and came to the decision that she’s mine. And she’s long overdue. By the end of the week she will be mine. I smirk to myself.

tabbi101 tabbi101 Jan 13
I like it. But as a writer myself...I'd slow down a bit. Put a little more detail into your story and maybe do one chapter for each POV instead of 4-5 in one chapter. I really like it though. Good job. :-)
Lauren778 Lauren778 Oct 18, 2016
I thought she was a wolf o I think she doesn't know idk....I'm kinda confused
ItsAna_ ItsAna_ Apr 16, 2016
I dont gives me an insight on what the other characters think lol
xoxRed_Rosexox xoxRed_Rosexox Sep 08, 2014
if shes a werewolf then why dont she knows about packs and mates and stuff? is it because she was raised by a human?
xoxRed_Rosexox xoxRed_Rosexox Sep 08, 2014
huh??? I thought she was a werewolf too... why she act so clueless?
Hellokitty123 Hellokitty123 Mar 13, 2013
@shans1970 Soon I promise. I think I want to give Tyler more time with Phoenix, ...