You mom died when you were 3, your dad left you when you were 10, and now now grand-parents died and your all alone. Until one day when you get adopted by your idol.....
I don't normally like these types of fanfics but I'll defiantly read this ine
Listen you criminal! (Jin) YOUR SAYING THATS SAD??!!! WELL EXCUSE MEH WHILE I WONDER WHY YOU WOULD DO SUCH THINGS TO A MINOR!!!
The only thing I could suggest is not giving our character a name. Put Y/N (Your Name) instead. Use like H/L (Hair Length) and H/C (Color of hair) and even the same with eye color.