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Colorful Twists

Colorful Twists

212K Reads 8.1K Votes 38 Part Story
T.S. Mariano By SaucyOneCurious Completed

Seth didn't expect to receive a bundle when he went grocery shopping, but he did. He makes the decision to take care of him. He doesn't expect the turns and twists his life will take when that bundle of joy joins soccer. He doesn't expect for those twists and turns to bring even more joy to him and his family.

Cover was done by Javan_forever :)!

I think the blurb is a bit unclear. I had doubts about reading cuz I didn't know what it was gonna be about. Not bad though.
sleepwalker sleepwalker Jul 18, 2014
Glad they gave him custody of the baby and it's good he is going to have help.
sleepwalker sleepwalker Jul 18, 2014
You know, most young guys wouldn't jump at the chance to take on this kind of responsibility. However i like that you made him want to and I can't wait to read more. :)
RaeKitano RaeKitano Jul 06, 2014
I like that you have made you character responsible. Seeking help and going to the hospital are events that would actually occur. It's amazing how many writers would over look this to make their story work. Well done. Your story has a great start.
SaucyOneCurious SaucyOneCurious Jul 04, 2013
@KakuyaDancer Oh I won't don't worry. 
                              It would be great anyway never know might use or give me an idea. I know how I want the story to go, but still have to figure out how to get there : ).
Alice-to-Alex Alice-to-Alex Jul 03, 2013
                              I barly white XD but just don't forget this story.