Being a Mother

Being a Mother

16 Part Story 14.7K Reads 102 Votes
Emily By RAWRitspenguin Completed

Being a mother is hard. This is for all the mums out there, who experience every hardship known. Rebecca knows all about suffering.

@RAWRitspenguin Wild Jewel, Mortal Enemy Immortal Lover or How Can I Keep Dancing...either of these three would be fantastic :) (Wild Jewel is my longest one so far)
                                    
                                    Each of these stories are Romance, but yeah, depends on which one may tickle your fancy :D
RAWRitspenguin RAWRitspenguin Nov 28, 2010 08:15PM
@RosemarieHathaway Thanks (: I've edited some parts now
                                    Is there any story you'd like me to read? Of yours, obviously :P
Remember to ask yourself "would a toddler really do this?"
                                    
                                    Again, you're going very fast in your story telling, and you need to slow down.
                                    
                                    A few spelling mistakes, but otherwise, good job :)
fifi1621 fifi1621 Nov 16, 2010 10:13PM
Straberry blonde hair? sure your not basing it on YOUR veiw of me??? xxxx
raquel104 raquel104 Nov 16, 2010 10:05PM
Yes, he's lovely sober, but it's the drunk part that worries me. This is nice. Sweet.
Jorgiie Jorgiie Nov 16, 2010 07:35PM
This is amazing! The first part made me cry a bit (I'm very emotinal). Upload soon! Voted!
                                    --Jordan:)