Survivors of a Broken World

Survivors of a Broken World

4.2K Reads 149 Votes 5 Part Story
Maddie0909 By Maddie0909 Completed

This book is something that I wrote a long time ago for my Language Arts class. It's not particularly amazing, but it has some funny bits and has a decent storyline I believe. I am free to answer any questions you have and I hope you enjoy this story.




P.S. This cover is not mine, I found it on the internet. No copyright Infringement intended.

  • science-fiction
  • short
Smokey_Roses Smokey_Roses May 29, 2018
This story is really good so far! I really like how the plot is going and how it's very well detailed, keep up the good work :D
Maddie0909 Maddie0909 Feb 26, 2016
Also the chapter titles aren't very creative because I made the sotry without chapters and had to quickly think of practical names
Maddie0909 Maddie0909 Feb 25, 2016
Hey guys! Hope you like the first part, the next chapter will be up soon I hope. Didn't have much time to edit so sorry if there's mistakes. :)
knotanumber knotanumber Jan 01
The writing is clear and reads smoothly but I would like to see more description and tone-setting. What's the food like? What does the landscape look like? I'm not really feeling the edge-of-survival robot apocalypse vibe.
Anormy Anormy Dec 02, 2018
This is a great paragraph. So true in ways too. Il carry on reading.
StarChampagne02 StarChampagne02 Dec 22, 2018
This is very interesting and its well written. I love it so far :)