Beat Me Bleeding

Beat Me Bleeding

269K Reads 5.3K Votes 27 Part Story
Tara Payne By taraniamh Completed

Abbie is just a normal 13 year old girl with a secret, Abbie has been abused by her father-Harry- ever since she was old enough to walk, her mother loves her but doesn't know anything about the beating although he beats her too. They both get saved by Paul but can Paul save them when Harry comes to get them again? Read on as Abbie leads you through her life.

  • abbie
  • abuse
  • baby
  • back
  • beat
  • beaten
  • best
  • birthday
  • blood
  • chidren
  • child
  • daddy
  • danger
  • danny
  • dead
  • death
  • depressing
  • die
  • dream
  • ellie
  • emo
  • friend
  • friends
  • funeral
  • happy
  • harry
  • hate
  • hospital
  • hurt
  • jenny
  • kidnapped
  • labor
  • love
  • memories
  • michael
  • mummy
  • nan
  • party
  • paul
  • police
  • pool
  • poor
  • pregnancy
  • rose
  • sad
  • scared
  • school
  • taken
  • thunderstorn
  • tim
  • vern
taraniamh taraniamh Jan 09, 2013
@MackennaBoone well this one does. i'm 16 and i still call my mum 'mammy'
XxImaginexX XxImaginexX Jul 03, 2012
WOW this is really good! I love that it has purpose unlike most of the supernatural novels most ppl write(Not that I don't love those too! <3), but truely amazing (:
grace_ful13 grace_ful13 May 06, 2012
Wow this story is really emotional and really hits home with the topic of abuse, its really well written. I really like it, you are a great writer! Stories like this inspire me to write, thank you! :)
smile4me_ smile4me_ Jul 22, 2011
I hardly cry and normally I laugh at horror scenes in movies but this brought tears to my eyes! Luckily no one is around or they would be questioning me!
FallingThroughHeaven FallingThroughHeaven Jul 12, 2011
YOu know for someone who isn't a victim ou sure do have the emotional trama down most people forget about that they just write about the physical trama.
RaphaeleCline RaphaeleCline Jun 22, 2011
Great start! This is really interesting considering my book is about the same subject ;) it inspires me haha I'm definitely reading on!