Who Knew He Actually Had a Heart

Who Knew He Actually Had a Heart

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Sarah Sanchez By SarahEliseee Updated May 04, 2011

Jasmine took care of her foster brother Louis after her foster mother left them. He's her world and will do anything for him. She struggles to compose herself everday as she waits for Jeremiah's call, her boyfriend who left her and Louis because of his dangerous secret. He calls her when he can but it isn't enough.  Her three best friends Tyler, Joseph, Isabel, and sometimes Grace are there to lift her spirits as much as they can. Then  Samuel comes along, a jerk who plays girls every month and treats them like dirt, shows interest in her, flirting with her every 5 minutes. Can he really change and have Jas fall in love with him, forgeting all about Jeremiah, who told her not to fall in love with anyone else but him, or will he be the same Jerk he is and just get in her pants?

SarahEliseee SarahEliseee Jul 13, 2011
@Thejune13m lol ohh shit my bad!! I used jayleen for another website lmao :P. Thank you<3(: but you don't have to. (:
Thejune10m Thejune10m Jul 13, 2011
i just realized you gave me the wrong username you gave me jayleen not sarena but jayleen who the hell is jayleen!! also good story i will continue on :)
SarahEliseee SarahEliseee May 04, 2011
@Callumbradbury101 Thanks for the feedback!(: Glad you liked the story line! :D I know the first and second chapter are choppy, I'll fix it up a bit when I have time(:
                              
                              Thanks for reading!!<3
RJames101 RJames101 May 04, 2011
I like the story line a lot. not that many grammar mistakes. :) carry on
                              
SarahEliseee SarahEliseee Dec 16, 2010
@OMGILoveBooks Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it! Oh and I appreciate you reading it fast lol you are awesome!!! Thanks a bunch for the advice I really needed it :)
                              <333 and im glad you liked it! 
                              
                              -Sarena
ilenejossie ilenejossie Dec 08, 2010
i love yuor story it is so interesting you have a really good tallent keep doing great stories like this one!!!!!=}