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Bittersweet Predator

Bittersweet Predator

180 Reads 6 Votes 2 Part Story
Bee By Belle23 Updated Nov 20, 2010

Vampire love story

Belle23 Belle23 Nov 16, 2010
@xxitunes22 Haha, no problem, i really enjoyed it, and i would really love that !
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 16, 2010
thnx for reading my story nd ill continue to read ur story wen u update
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 16, 2010
really good...try spacing out the paragraphs and maybe begin a new line with new dialogue
                              also could u read my story and give back feedback thanx