In too deep -Depression and selfharm

In too deep -Depression and selfharm

43.7K Reads 4.7K Votes 189 Part Story
Jasmine By JasmineClaflin Updated Nov 28

A collection of poems and quotes about self harm ,suicide ,anxiety and  depression .

Number 14 in poetry -Jul 2016
Number 11 In poetry -August 2016

This is my first story on Wattpad and I think it's so beautiful!! Really enoyable.
iwillian2 iwillian2 Aug 31
So why be depressed about it then? That's the final inevitable outcome for all, I am sorry to say.
This is short, but gets to the point. If you want constructive advice, I suggest you remove "like" or add a comma after "Depression" and remove "is like" Good work!
I love your bluntness and honesty. As a person who understands that level of emotional detachedness and sadness and it's lasting effects, I know time doesn't heal, but s it goes by you learn to cope, and that's all we can do: Cope.