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Him Again

Him Again

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Maddie Cooper By MaddieCooper644 Updated Mar 14, 2016

I'm writing a FanFiction about Jared Leto's Joker I mean I first look at him and imagine what it would be like to be dating him, I mean who hasn't. So the character I created turns out to be an old friend of his and Harley's who returns after 5 years of being gone, this sparks feelings he kept buried until he saw her again......

It's a good story but you need to work on your punctuation, comas and wording.I'm not trying to hate or anything, and the plot does seem pretty solid, just some minor details that you need to work on.
- - Aug 23, 2016
Haha im actually thinking of those guy narrators who are in thise detective stuff😂