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Loving a Goon

Loving a Goon

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October Silver By within_sevenfold27 Updated Apr 01

After a tragic accident tears apart their friendship group, once best friends Kenji and Darian have never gotten along. 
      Kenji thinks Darian is a goon who has nothing better to do than cause trouble and terrorize others. Darian, on the other hand, has secretly been in love with Kenji for as long as he can remember, but he has a funny way of showing it. 
       It all changes when they are thrust back into each other's lives, and while their old group is slowly reunited, there's definitely something beyond friendship growing between the boys. Suppressed desires surface and new feelings arise. 
       Despite crippling fears, personal demons, lurking secrets, a new nemesis, and their own tainted history, the attraction is undeniable. As Kenji and Darian fall in too deep, the pair must endure the consequences that accompany loving a goon.

    * Copyright © 2016 October Silver. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in any form or by any means, including photocopying, recording, or other electronic or mechanical methods, without the prior written permission of October Silver. 
    * The visual image used in the cover art of this story along with all multimedia are the sole property of their respective owners.  
    * Updated regularly. 
    * Warning for strong language, crude humor, and explicit sexual content. 
    * Posted: February 24, 2016
       Completed: N/A

MachKingly MachKingly Aug 31, 2016
Thank you for this! Well written diverse AND respectful books are so hard to find.
HeatheRadio HeatheRadio Aug 01, 2016
I really enjoy your writing style. You gave the readers background info without info dumping, which is hard to master. Good job! Your characters are diverse and unique. Kenai having a girlfriend isn't something I expected, but I really enjoy it. I can't wait to read more after work!
star-powered star-powered Jul 08, 2016
I love the way you hook the reader with the backstory. You don't reveal too much but still give just enough to make me curious to know what happened! This is a pretty strong start for a story. Nothing makes me want to keep reading like a little bit of mystery :)
LoverBoy2810 LoverBoy2810 Jul 18, 2016
So far I see no errors in this story. The plot is great, the description and dialogues are wonderful and your grammar isn't faulty. I'm really excited to see where this is going and to see what exactly happened between all of Kenji's friends.
YoungAuthor531 YoungAuthor531 Sep 21, 2016
im deadass reading the japanese words with accents i listen to that language too much
ChosenMaster ChosenMaster Jul 26, 2016
This is a great first chapter. I seen no errors. The pacing was good. Love the multimedia and the relationship between the characters. (Kenji and his friends) This was a great first chapter with a bit of mystery which is always good in my opinion.