Tango(#Wattys2016)

Tango(#Wattys2016)

12.8K Reads 1K Votes 31 Part Story
Dzah-Dah Zali By ZAaali Completed

He did not even spared her a look , that was not usual , guys always noticed her .That itched her inside . He had his reasons to avoid her and he did .
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  ''what if he ...ummm ...wants me  ?''
  
  ''do you want him ?''
  
  ''but i owe him ...everything ''
  
  ''first of all you don't owe him anything but me ''
  
  ''yes, you are right ...umm ...and second ?''
  
  ''second thing is , it does not matter
  
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  And there is a Drama kitty .........with a lot of attitude
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  There are three chapters with mature content .but overall it's just a romance.

This is story is very nice. Personally, I would go check all my caps at the beginning of sentences, but other than that, amazing story!
Omg is she gonna fall for Nathan and never figure out that Elliott secretly loved her?
Great story, but, I feel as though the beginning of chapters  is too blunt.
PennyZee PennyZee Jun 12
Nathan and Elliot may be brothers, but they differ like crazy!
I love it. Yes the grammar can get some work however I understand everything.  I have read many stories here that have the same errors but as long as the story line flows it's fine
kur-nee kur-nee Jul 13
This is the best friendship i've ever heard. Oh God, the best people i hope still exist in this world. Hmm..;)