Photographing Monsters

Photographing Monsters

1.7K Reads 79 Votes 1 Part Story
Pollard Wharly By PollardWharly Completed

Centered around a bank robbery in Baltimore, Maryland, a psychotic man faces his past , his reality and the future he's trying to transform in this powerful and completely original story about the problems we, as individuals face every day--simply on a scale hopefully none of us ever have to face. The story is told through First-person narration in an expiremental style creating an inverted timeline. 

A Story of Real-life monsters, and putting the pieces of the puzzle back in place.

  • crazy
  • monsters
  • photographing
  • suspense
Kelissa Kelissa Nov 30, 2011
This is great. The imagery is like nothing I've ever read before.
                              Deffinately makes you think.
                              Keep writing! :)
LostDMBFiles LostDMBFiles Sep 04, 2011
beautifully complex and wonderfully executed. It is rare to find something so contemplative without losing pace and plot. Thank you.
dreamyteen dreamyteen Jul 03, 2011
awesome descriptions, the details are just too good! loved it...the length seems big, if you could possibly break it up into 3 or 4 chapters it would be a bit more comfortable to read but otherwise it's really fabulous!
katrocks247 katrocks247 Jul 03, 2011
Wow this is so professional looking! Really amazing, I love the descriptions, the details are amazing. I also how it was counting back every minute. Really great job! :D
dreamyteen dreamyteen Jul 03, 2011
love the beginning...i'm still reading but i just wanted to comment, amazing!
branflakes94 branflakes94 Jul 03, 2011
Nice flow! I love the detail! :) I don't really like how long it is, started getting boring, but other than that amazing job! Voted!