The Pain that Made Her Beautiful

The Pain that Made Her Beautiful

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courtwriter By courtwriter Updated Mar 18, 2014

Nayeli is a slave in an Ancient Roman town called Sarni and is content with her life, that is until a raiding party of Germanic tribesmen kidnap her and try to bring her back to Germania. She has mysterious amber eyes, long jet black hair, and a tongue that often gets her in trouble. But there's something about her that goes deeper than what it seems. Who is she really?  Why is she where she is now? Is there more to life than just bitterness and sadness? Nayeli doesn't think so. She has seen a wold that is far from kind; however, her best friend and sister in all but blood, Neorah, believes there is a way out of this cycle of pain and suffering. Along the road, many characters are introduced, not all are who they might appear to be. The sickness of the human state is exposed by some; however, there is a prize, a victory, and a goal worth reaching.

courtwriter courtwriter May 08, 2012
@haughtyprincess 
                              Wow. thank you so much for the compliments and for reading. I appreciate it so much! Also, give me feedback on what I can improve on and what not. I would very much enjoy that.
                              Thank you again for reading! =D
courtwriter courtwriter Apr 11, 2012
@FrostyTheChicken @suns3ta @jo24december 
                               Thank you all for reading and for taking the time to see what I wrote. I appreciate it so much!
frostychicken frostychicken Feb 12, 2012
It's really intriguing and interesting! :) On to chapter 2! (:
courtwriter courtwriter Jan 17, 2012
@njoki10serendipity 
                              Thank you for the encouragement. I hope you continue ti enjoy it. =)
JeremyReichert JeremyReichert Oct 03, 2011
i think it's because i am overly critical in things such as grammar, but i found some spelling errors. i always do, i can't help it. so, after trying to read it for what it is and not for correcting the errors, i think it is pretty darn good!
courtwriter courtwriter Oct 03, 2011
It's a good name. I agree. The fact that it means "I love you" is only a plus! =D