Memories

Memories

14.7K Reads 2.4K Votes 20 Part Story
Kazue Tsubasa By PurpleCielo1117 Updated Feb 08

❛ In which Johnathan is given a second chance to love and to lose her again. ❜

Ranked #393 in General Fiction

【I Survived The Most Brutal Review】
【Winner of The Brigade Choice Awards for SS】
【Winner of Star Writing Awards for GF】
【Winner of The Undiscovered Awards for GF, Original At Its Core and Straight From The Heart】
【Winner of Rose Awards for GF】

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  • dementia
  • fictioninaction
  • guilt
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  • sfth2016
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  • undiscovered2016
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I love how different this beginning is. It's unlike anything I have ever read before and it shows that you are trying to be different with your style of writing. 
                              
                              Open Line Score: 10/10
                              Chapter Score: 10/10
                              Closing Sentence Score: 10/10
                              
                              This was beautiful. You've earned a new reader.
scarlett_416 scarlett_416 Jan 04, 2017
I think we only know the true value of things once it's gone
lilmissfaboo lilmissfaboo Dec 31, 2016
This is a very good start to the story. It evokes emotion before the story has even began and that's a very good thing. I also liked how relatable it was. A lot of can probably relate to this. Good job! :)
-gossipman -gossipman Jan 04, 2017
also the little quote on your blurb made my heart ache, and that was before i'd even opened the book! genuinely excited for this (but scared this is going to be a tear jerker)
scarlett_416 scarlett_416 Jan 04, 2017
This is so beautiful, ur writing has a way of evoking emotions
Opheliawinter Opheliawinter Jun 12, 2016
Ok but this beginning is so organised and all and actually really cool . i love it .