We will meet in Heaven

We will meet in Heaven

566 Reads 12 Votes 2 Part Story
Emily By Emmi_lou2 Updated Nov 14, 2010

My name is Raven Nichole James and my father is insane. He beats me with anything he can get his hands on and does not quit until i am almost all black and blue. My mother died while giving birth to my brother who was killed in a house fire started by my dad. My only escape from the torture is by playing the piano... and soon by being with this one special person. But doctors are starting to worry about me. They are trying to get me to take the medication my father has to take for his insanity. Will i become like him?

eyeofthebeholder eyeofthebeholder Nov 14, 2010
I like this story a lot, one thing i do suggest is to break up the beginning into two or more paragraphs just to make it easier to read, other then that its AMAZING!
Juicebox108 Juicebox108 Nov 12, 2010
That was Amazing! If you do not continue this, I will be extremly sad.
                              That was probally one of the best stories I've read on here, that was better then some Published books I've read! Purely Incredible.
Emmi_lou2 Emmi_lou2 Nov 12, 2010
Please if you do not mind, give me some criticism on what ever you think needs to be fixed.