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On a mission gone wrong Ezra gets injured pretty bad.
What will happen to Ezra? What will the crew do? And most importantly, what will the empire do?
Admiral Ackabar and the legendary 'I've got a bad feeling about this'!!!
Well I don't know everyone else ends one or two chapters with a little of suspense.
Well, a wise Internet thing once told me that everything has room for improvement, because no thing's perfect. So really, my story can do better, yours can, everyone's can. But I think it's good!!! Maybe add a but more detail, but other then that it's fine!!!!
-Admiral Ackbar at the battle of endor.
-Leah on Cloud city.
This is actually really good but I'll just say that more detail could be added.
This book is amazing all it needs is a few more detail but hey it's your story so keep up the awesome writing