What if?

What if?

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M. Currie By thevelvetrose Completed

*Currently Editing* (Read my stories Horrifying New Start, Rise Against, then It Ends here.. 
first)  *This is an Alternative to them*
A series of kidnappings have been happening on earth. Hundreds of females have been taken. Samantha, an eighteen year old girl. didn't think much of it. until it happens to her. 
On another planet where females are needed. Samantha has been brought to by the handsome jerk named Jack. who isnt even human. She is faced with many trials as she tries to get home to earth.  
What if Zack had never taken Samantha? but Jack did. how would this change things?

I always pictured penny as like Zoey Deschanel or Jennifer Hewitt
thevelvetrose thevelvetrose Jun 08, 2011
@Kalianna 
                              Yes, this is an alternative to them. If Zack didn't take her, but Jack had. :)
SwaunaOsa SwaunaOsa May 26, 2011
i have no time to brush the dirt off my clothes i just ran .......lmfao.........u even have time to think of brushing yr clothes...........haha yr not ready to escape 
                              if u did know that part cracked me up
softballchick51 softballchick51 May 26, 2011
This is a good story. Nice introduction, it caught my eye, keep up the good work. also love how you keep the story going and not ending it so soon, so we can get a feel for the story.
CountMein CountMein Mar 08, 2011
This is interesting, it had a very weird twist. Planet Renton. Interesting, Very good, although there are some grammar giffs in a few places but looks just like your forgot or something. Amazing story!! Woot! 
E-rance E-rance Mar 07, 2011
@hotpinklipstick i like your comment you seem like a writter pliz read my story twist and turns and tell me if it is good