The Shy Boy And The Dragon

The Shy Boy And The Dragon

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kayla By kaylachloe Updated Nov 14

Alex is a shy 19 year old starting his new job at the local library. Being his old high schools top nerd he didnt have any friends so Alex usually spends his time with his face buried in fantasy books. But one night while he was in the cleaning up the library a mysterious man stumbles in bleeding heavily from wounds on his stomach. Alex of course rushed over trying to stop the bleeding but the mystery man begs him not to call the police, so what does Alex do? Brings the man home with him of course. So what happens when this mystery man heals much faster than he should be able to, and is very cryptic about his life? What will happen between him and Alex? Read to find out more!

Hey, just saying to help you out. You said one bedroom house. So change that to two bedroom or someth'n. Love your story.
I think the chapter is too short and i need more character description
cavesong cavesong May 29
I LOVE THIS BOOK already i volunteer at my library and i shelve books ☆
AiMila AiMila Nov 01
I do look between him and the phone 2 or 3 more times before nodding
Your sentences are a bit short and choppy here; try combining a few and see if they flow together better then. And combine the introduction details with action so it's a little more interesting for the reader, plus it'll be easier to remember :) great job! xx