Branded To Him (On Hold)

Branded To Him (On Hold)

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Rue Varron By BlackInkHeart Updated Dec 28, 2012

I froze; the guard yelled, telling me to get a move on. The unearthly screeching sent all of us into shock, soon turning into fear. Some cried the moment they reached the door. I didn't know what was coming, but it'd be painful.
“Next!” I was two kids away from the cold metal plated door. I closed my eyes, hearing a scream from behind the door. The girl in front of me started to cry.
“Shut up!” A guard yelled, slapping her cheek. My eyes widened and I forced myself to swallow tears that threatened to fall.
“Next!” My sore bare feet scraped across the dark tiled floor as I made my way forward while the next child went in. I wouldn't survive a slap to the cheek, no matter how strong I looked.
“Next!” The girl in front of me quivered and shook, her fear obvious. I cringed away from the door as a laugh echoed in the next room.
“Stand up straight!” The guard yelled at me. I didn't dare look him in the eyes, knowing I'd be hit like the last child that stared at him.
“Next!” My skin crawled as the door opened...

lroseu lroseu Dec 02
@BlackInkHeart hi! Are you still looking for a cover??? If so, I can have one ready by the end of the weekend!
blackbureau blackbureau Oct 27, 2015
Hey guys ik this is a bit annoying but I hope you can read my story and tell me if its good or not. It's about a girl who has to marry the guy she hates and live with him. https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/52721546-married-to-the-devil
xXAmy_CXx xXAmy_CXx Oct 20, 2015
I love your writing style! I look forward to reading more. :)
Okura23 Okura23 May 25, 2013
@Okura23 please disregard my last message. It was ment for a different story
SaraAnnWhite SaraAnnWhite Mar 26, 2013
Cool this book got a lot of great comment ill read a hve maybe added to my favorite list Iam going to get started bye :)
ShonnaParker ShonnaParker Feb 03, 2013
Oh I am really into this book. Can't wait on you to upload again :) look forward to seeing if brandy and master fall for each other :)