The Blue Wolf

The Blue Wolf

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👑TheVampireQueen👑 By ignited_flame789 Completed


These words seemed enough to describe my life. I hated it. I craved a better life, jealous because of those who had it. I was a wreck, but I couldn't change anything. 
Bad luck practically ran in the family, but what would pull the last string? What would happen? Would i become stronger, or weaker. Any of those could be my downfall.
- started writing: Tuesday 17.2.2015
-age: 11
- finished writing: Monday 29.03.2015
I woke up to bloodcurdling screams. Quickly, I looked at my window, and froze. I tried to close my eyes from the horrific scenes in front of me, but I was petrified.  I just stood there, fighting of a panic attack, as most of my pack members were killed. 

Since I had alpha blood in me, I could feel each and every pain wave in my body, like a bloody tidal wave. My terrifying thoughts distracted me, and I didn't notice men coming in. 

Just as I turned around, I was attacked to the floor as a wolf bit me on my shoulder. Blood was gushing out of my shoulders, like a tsunami, and I slowly started to feel numb. The last thought that I had before becoming unconscious was,'rouges'.
A couple of comments that made me smile like crazy:-
         @zeemasood - "OMG an absolute delight to read!"
         @nermeen2994 - "Loved it!"
         @Greenteadragon - "I'm really impressed with your description of the forest."
         @seemalz12 - "Aww sad, but love the flashback idea"
         @amomentt - "Omg this is so nice! Can I have a minute to say how well this book is written? The plot is amazing :) I know this book will be hot-selling in the future because it is too awesome! I hope you will continue writing and inspire writers like us!"

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bigdave6353 bigdave6353 Jul 08, 2017
I looked at the table of contents and there is too much crap in here not related to the story for me to continue reading.
Ltcaine1 Ltcaine1 Sep 15, 2016
I love the way you are writing this book and keep up with the good work 😀 😀
name_s_aphrodisiac name_s_aphrodisiac Jan 31, 2017
But that's the purpose of the comment section. Those negative comments have some truth in them.
Ltcaine1 Ltcaine1 Sep 15, 2016
I love the way you are writing this book and keep up with the good work 😀 😀