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I'm In Love With a Criminal (writers block!)

I'm In Love With a Criminal (writers block!)

3.2K Reads 42 Votes 5 Part Story
CamillaLuv By CamillaLuv Updated Jan 29, 2011

Bonnie Wanch is a 16 year old girl, she's the head cheerleader, straight A student, tall, popular blond beauty that every girl wants to be. She has a the best boyfriend and she is happy with him until Jason Hunter comes to town. He dissaperes from class, is quiet, keeps to himself. Bonnie has to choose between the good boy or the bad mysterious boy.

summer1994 summer1994 May 02, 2011
i dont like Bonnie, the way she thinks or anything about her really it makes it hard to want to read on because I dont really care about what happens to her like whether she does get together with Jason etc 
bluee_chalk bluee_chalk Nov 20, 2010
I thought that your story was really good, however it could do with jus a lil polish. I'll tell you how wen you reply ;) 
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 16, 2010
heyy that was really goodd
                              u get my vote
                              also could u read my story 
                              and comment with a constructive criticism thnx
CamillaLuv CamillaLuv Nov 14, 2010
@akino20 il try and can you plz tell ur friends 
                              @Sarastar il tell you if i upload
akino20 akino20 Nov 14, 2010
NIce one.............I tought Bonnie would dump Nick???.........does Jason stalked Bonnie???....the story is very interesting and i Love it..........pls. upload already if you have a time =)
Sarastar Sarastar Nov 14, 2010
WOW I'm hooked keep it up and keep me posted I love it! VOTED AND FAN!!