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Painting Murders - (A Sherlock fanfic)

Painting Murders - (A Sherlock fanfic)

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TinytotSMC By Tinytotsmc Updated Sep 17, 2013

Everly Sapphire is struggling through life. Her mum's gone; her dad's wrapped up in a drinking problem, trying his hardest to be the best he can be even though he's sickened with grief. Everly is alone and slowly resorting to crime, until something conscience changing happens. Now she's crossed paths with an old 'friend' - a Consulting Detective and his blogger, and is thrown head first into a world she thought she'd left behind her for good. 
And to top it off there's a murderer about who has an artistic flare . . . 

(This is my first ever fanfiction guys so don't be too harsh haha :) ) hope you enjoy :)

wingedwerewolf wingedwerewolf May 30, 2016
This would be 'Majesty's', as it is possessive. The face belonging to Her Majesty. The form you used was plural, but it's an easy mistake to make.
ALL YALL GRAMMER POLICE SHUT UP AND JUST
                              
                              
                              ENJOY THIS BEAUTIFULLY WORDED PARAGRAPH FOR A NEW FANFICTION WRITER.
                              
                              I LOVE IT
JuicyPorkCutletBowl JuicyPorkCutletBowl Nov 05, 2016
@wingedwerewolf lol im not the only one... I finally found someone who notices the little things👋
CrissySkinnerMoxley CrissySkinnerMoxley Jul 29, 2016
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wingedwerewolf wingedwerewolf May 30, 2016
Than; then is a chronological adverb. Than is a comparative (___ is ___ than ___)
I know you hate this, and I don't want to be so unkind, but I wanted to ask if you noticed you wrote 'logo' twice?
                              
                              You do not have to fix it, I'm actually just curious.