Hey this is my second Fan Fic, I deleted my first because I was not very happy with what I had done with it so I decided to make another one on a different subject so hope you enjoy.
I agree what is with the quotation marks? There are none of them please add them.
Don't take this personally but it is kind of hard to read with out them
Um... I'm sorry, but have you heard of quotation marks?
What book do you read that doesn't have quotation marks? Or spaces?
Holy. Mother. Of. Cats. (Sebastan: WHERE?!) I'M BATMAN'S DAUGHTER
I usually don't read not completed stories buuuut my obsession with Nightwing aka Dick Grayson has had a growth spurt so yeah.
Why is there no quotation marks! I couldn't tell when someone was speaking! OMG Its like OCD Or something!
This story would be brilliant if you used quotation marks, for instance "hello, this story us good but there's one BIG problem". Please fix this issue, it would make the story loads more enjoyable to read...