The Parks Escape

The Parks Escape

1 Part Story 8K Reads 170 Votes
Michael J.P. Whitmer By MikeJPW Completed

Andrew Parks' grandfather comes to warn him of an evil plot to have him killed. The only other problem? His grandfather's been dead for the last two years, or has he?

that was really good. i love it very interesting. it was different to what i normal read. but very intriguing and engaging
MikeJPW MikeJPW Dec 29, 2012 01:43AM
@jdporange Your words are much appreciated. Thanks for reading.
jdporange jdporange Dec 26, 2012 04:49AM
This is some real quality work that I'd like to see published. So confused - but in a very good way.
MahaliaJudd MahaliaJudd Jul 25, 2012 03:09AM
Ha! I love this! I was a bit confused but it all makes sense in the end :)
Very cleverly written, I like how it ties in with the start. :D
AlexisRichard AlexisRichard Mar 23, 2012 01:43PM
Awesome!! I love how not all the questions are answered completely, so you still have room to imagine your own reasons and motivations behind the father's attack.  Really well done and thought out! Love the bit at the end too by the way. Very Back to the Future- ish.