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My mate rejected me

My mate rejected me

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sammiefutureauthor99 By sammiefutureauthor99 Updated Jan 20, 2016

Introduction- my mate rejected me I have nothing to live for I have lost my soul mate my life my heart the one reason I was on this earth the last thing I remember seeing was his stern eyes and hear the way his voice sounded when he said 'I Jason nick Dominic dangelo reject you scarvious rose wiltflower dingolos to be my mate' he had said it with such authority I had whimpered I remember I had bowed my head low whimpering then my anger swelled in me and I remember saying'I SCARVIOUS ROSE WILTFLOWER DINGOLOS REJECT YOUR REJECTION AND HERE BY QUIT THIS PACK UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE I WISH YOU TO SUFFER THE PAIN I AM FEELING RIGHT NOW JASON NICK DOMINIC DANGELO!!!!'

seralefosio1621 seralefosio1621 Jul 22, 2016
It's sorta hard to read cause the punctuation isn't very good, no offense but overall I think it's a pretty good so far
StephanieSmith193 StephanieSmith193 Sep 07, 2016
Love the names for her and her two kids and the fact that she's will to adopt them
plsshowyour plsshowyour Sep 27, 2016
It's hard to read because there are no comma or any period the readers like ne don't know where are we going to stop
- - Jun 25, 2015
Woah! Slow down *___* I didn't see any commas or periods. Don't rush, explain what the fück is happening. Nobody wants to read a story where the author goes too fast, and expects a lot of reads. This is just a suggestion.
Shanriel_Mortis69 Shanriel_Mortis69 Jun 03, 2014
wow that rouge's pretty gorgeus, also please keep writing and god bless XDD