Riley In The Galaxy (work in progress)

Riley In The Galaxy (work in progress)

2.8K Reads 155 Votes 4 Part Story
Joshua Verry Jerry By JoshuaVerryJerry Updated Nov 12, 2011

For Jacob Riley a standard delivery isn’t much of a challenge when it comes to smuggling. So when a thief offers him a job to transport her stolen property, it looks like a simple point A to point B deal. As far as he’s concerned its good pay. However when a price is put on his head and his crew by a powerful corporation, his trust is wavered between his loyalties towards the job or saving his crew. Things get complicated when news emerges of his long lost father’s involvement with the goods that are hidden aboard his ship. The situation escalates and he is forced to escape from the ruthless warlord/bounty hunter Randall Crow who may just know everything that there is about Riley. As he investigates deeper while encountering dangers of venturing into the sector of the mysterious Pyrovores, an alien race who prefer not to be interfered by humans and their neighboring alien species, he will have to keep watch on his back and front. Racing against time he will come across different kinds of allies and choices that force him to unlock secrets from his past that will put things in a different perspective.

JamesCousino JamesCousino Jun 15, 2012
Creative, but I think you should add just a little more detail. Change your sentence structure a bit.
JoshuaVerryJerry JoshuaVerryJerry Jun 06, 2012
@hellyeailoveme Troy is the fictional city, the moon are real though :P
BallOonCrayOn BallOonCrayOn Jun 06, 2012
@JoshuaVerryJerry I am unable to believe I actually tried something new other than teen-fiction; romance; mystery :p 
                              :p Is troy even the name of one of the 62 moons, like in real?
JoshuaVerryJerry JoshuaVerryJerry Jun 06, 2012
@hellyeailoveme haha thanks!! Ive uploaded some chapters but yea shall upload more
BallOonCrayOn BallOonCrayOn Jun 06, 2012
Oh. My. God. I actually read a chapter of a book which is under science fiction and I actually liked it!! :O Your writing is flawless and is captivating!!! :O Science Fiction!!!! Ohmygod! I still can't believe it! Upload it soon!
JoshuaVerryJerry JoshuaVerryJerry May 17, 2012
@TheNerdyGirl haha
                              
                              yeahh you did! and yes im trying lol im just working out some kinks :P