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Mr & Mrs Wrong 🐊

Mr & Mrs Wrong 🐊

14.8K Reads 1.8K Votes 51 Part Story
Kristie By Kristiekc Completed

Complete: @ 2016...editing...  
  I was getting out of this fucking marriage with an Oscar the size of the Grand Canyon. I saw myself stumbling along a red carpet, weighed down by a colossal golden statue. I didn't care about the stupid celebrities I knocked out of the way. I was coming through, mauled, but alive. 

Meet  Helen, a small girl with a big imagination, the odd addiction and an insane husband, Aiden, or Rasputin as he is fondly referred to.  If you're into flawed, gritty and real characters, you might like this humor/chicklit. 
  Is the light at the end of the tunnel a speeding train?  You bet your arse it is!  But, just occasionally a real prince charming might pull you off the tracks.
  
  
     
  
      Warning; Contains Jelly fish and some swear words , well you'd swear, if you were married to a mental case. Unedited but I'm getting there sorta.

henry_scott henry_scott Dec 23, 2016
How to fix the time jump? Delete these paragraphs and add a sentence before 'l'm coming home.'
ShaunEyles ShaunEyles Dec 17, 2016
Wow, two charming characters here! I don't know who I should be feeling sorry for.
henry_scott henry_scott Dec 23, 2016
The time jump here reads odd, but not sure how to fix it. Does all the dialogue in the call happen earlier or the night he came home?
CliffJonesJr CliffJonesJr Nov 23, 2016
Er... not sure how this makes sense. Ground glass would pretty much be the texture of sand, right? If it were ground so fine you wouldn't notice grittiness in mashed potatoes, then I don't think the particles would be big enough to actually hurt you.
ShaunEyles ShaunEyles Dec 17, 2016
Eddie the Eagle! Love it! With that reference he wouldn't make a go of it.
henry_scott henry_scott Dec 23, 2016
Was this the chapter you edited? I can tell some differences in the beginning.