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Isn't it obvious? By HaLy Updated Jun 01, 2011

Alice, her brother, Micah, and her mom have finally found enough money to board a cruise ship for a while and enjoy the beautiful view of the sea. However, how long will this delightful family vacation on the Borromeo Pacific Cruise stay so pleasant?

Essence-Of-Ingenuity Essence-Of-Ingenuity May 21, 2011
@HaLy Alright, alright then. Whatever floats your boat. ;) And you're welcome. 
HaLy HaLy May 20, 2011
@Essence-Of-Ingenuity Thanks. ^^ I really appreciate your critique and the time you put in to help me. I'm really looking for constructive criticism after all, since I'm just starting out. So I'm open to any advice. :)
Essence-Of-Ingenuity Essence-Of-Ingenuity May 19, 2011
@HaLy  Good to know. An open mind is one of the best qualities a person can have.  :) 
HaLy HaLy Dec 18, 2010
@dreamernow31 thx so much for the vote!! Rlly means a lot to me!! ^^