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he kiddnaped me, we became soulmates, he then cheated on me. i hate my life

he kiddnaped me, we became soulmates, he then cheated on me. i hate my life

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samantha or sammy By cheesecakeluver Updated Feb 13, 2011

for all the girls out there who have been let down by a guy. this story was wrote base on a heart broken girl. sammy is a strong girl. stronger than she knows. danny is a lifeless ruler only cares about himself. when they meet they fall in mad love. they choose only each other forever. tell danny sleeps with another chick. sammy catches them she leaves. will danny try to beg her back? will he make it up to her? or has he lost her forever?

xXxXbloodytearsxXxX xXxXbloodytearsxXxX Mar 05, 2012 tears are like *blood*. i'm crying os hard rite now. cant wait for the steamy scene. luv this storyu ((no homo)).xXxX
mjRamirez mjRamirez Jan 14, 2011
a little confusing at first but overall a good story from what i read!
xLadyBirdx xLadyBirdx Jan 08, 2011
OK. So i thought i'd read it all then comment and so far i think its Not so bad, I would of loved it more but like @love4bidden said it kind of went a bit to fast, and their's a lot of mistakes. I think it's best to get an editor. Just to go over it. Every Writer must have on. Good Luck :)
cheesecakeluver cheesecakeluver Nov 27, 2010
@Love4bidden thanks i dont mind. im glad you told me so i can do better in he future
cheesecakeluver cheesecakeluver Nov 17, 2010
@wowlover0525 thnk so much and i know my editing is bad bu hey i mange to keep a c in read . thanks so much
YouWereWrong YouWereWrong Nov 17, 2010
This is good, but it needs A LOT of editing, there are capitalization errors, punctuation errors, past, present, and future errors, and homophone errors. Other than that, THIS IS DAMN GOOD!